You have observed folds very well and use them very effectively. Your panel layout adds to the harried situation of your poor friend. Shoot, I do that every morning. Your line thickness variance in the 1st, action, and last panel are very nice. Love the pose in the action panel, looks great. Keep up the great work!
Thank you
Would you mind giving me your opinion on "Inner Edge"? It is my first toned/texted and is going to be on-going, so I really care for all comments/advice/feelings that I can get...
Thank you very much! Have you took a lok at Inner Edge? I am badly in need of critique on this as I just start toning and find it... hard It will be an ongoing story, so any comment would be very much appreciated..
arf..je suis trop nulle pour le toning lol pourtant il faudrait que je m'y mette, trop bien ta page en tout cas, il y a du mouvement alors tu as commencé ton webcomic?
oui! allelouia! 3 pages crayonnees, j'ai enfin debloque, yay! Par contre, ca va prendre un peu de temps pour l'encrage et surtout le toning - jamais fait ca avant...
I like the way you displayed the frames, it looks very dynamic ^^
heh the last panel looks the funniest
Would you mind giving me your opinion on "Inner Edge"? It is my first toned/texted and is going to be on-going, so I really care for all comments/advice/feelings that I can get...