You have observed folds very well and use them very effectively. Your panel layout adds to the harried situation of your poor friend. Shoot, I do that every morning. Your line thickness variance in the 1st, action, and last panel are very nice. Love the pose in the action panel, looks great. Keep up the great work!
Thank you very much! Have you took a lok at Inner Edge? I am badly in need of critique on this as I just start toning and find it... hard It will be an ongoing story, so any comment would be very much appreciated..