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Puella Aeterna p28by ~Tacto

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And here it is, the end of the story that ends with the final words of J.M.Barrie's book. Will they meet again? Will they be able to rekindle their friendship? Who knows?

What did you think of this story? I would love to have your comments/critique. ^__^

Also, it will be available in print form as part of the PeterPan anthology from the BentoComics site next week, so check it out

www.bentocomics.com

~Thulesse May 24, 2012 Student Traditional Artist

Welp, aside from that one quibble that I can't even remember exactly what it was, I have no language crit.

Well done!

~Niirochi May 23, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Amazing~ I'm no good at critiquing, nor do I have anything to critique. So, instead I'm going to be one of those unhelpful praisers. Amazing work, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

~Tacto Jun 24, 2012

Thank you very much ^^ It makes me happy to know that you liked the story - it was very narrative driven, so not to everyone's taste, so I am really glad that some people still enjoyed it ^__^

*Valendra May 17, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

It was very intriguing, sweet and intense for a short story. I loved it seriously!

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~Tacto May 17, 2012

Thank you very much for reading and supporting it ^__^ It makes me really happy to know that you liked it - this one was definitely an experimental thing for me and I wrote it mostly for my own satisfaction - so I really wondered if anyone else would relate to it or enjoy it. You made my day

*Valendra May 18, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

You're welcome

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`richten May 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I don't have anything to critique, but I really enjoyed it. It's a nice story and you did a great job telling it

~Tacto May 17, 2012

Thank you very much for reading ^^ I am so glad you enjoyed it (I was laughing to myself when posting it, thinking of one of your old comments on IE about how it lacked girls - finally the balance is re-established

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`richten May 18, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

You remembered that?

I tell you, you draw the loveliest girls

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